The Phantom Fleet, by Julien Boyer
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The Phantom Fleet, by Julien Boyer
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Cold war between Earth and Mars. A massive invasion fleet suddenly appears off the corner of the solar system, headed towards Earth. The nearest patrol ship is sent to investigate, with little chance of survival.
The Phantom Fleet, by Julien Boyer- Published on: 2015-10-02
- Released on: 2015-10-02
- Format: Kindle eBook
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7 of 7 people found the following review helpful. Confusing. Awkward. Not Good At All. By J Bryden Lloyd Book Review: The Phantom Fleetby Julian BoyerReviewed by J Bryden LloydWriting Style – 3.0/5.0 (Okay)What content was there, was alright. Even bordering on good, as long as you were only really expecting a dialogue-driven, first person narrative.In that respect, it was passable.The structure felt awkward, the flow was almost non-existent as the plot jumped endlessly from problem to problem. Add to this a plethora of meaningless terminology thrown in everywhere (and only some of it sort-of-explained at the end of the story) and the result is what feels like a breathless sprint through something that feels like an opening sequence.Character Development – 0.0/5.0 (No Comment)This is a first. I’ve never given a zero before.Unfortunately, there was no character development, no background, no depth to the Lexi character (or any others). Nothing.Descriptive – 3.0/5.0 (Okay)All of the descriptive is very much done ‘on-the-move’, which only really works because of the battle scenario and all that is going on around the main character.Scene-building is negligible at best, only one character is actually described in any way, and then only in a very rudimentary way.There just isn’t enough to build upon.Language & Grammar – 2.0/5.0 (Poor)On the few occasions a normal sentence structure – with understandable terminology – was there, it was very good with a reasonable flow.As soon as the author deviated into anything else, it felt chaotic and thrown together.The editing looked like it was a spelling and grammar checker job. Too many spelling errors, missing or incorrect words… Not to mention the use of ‘WTF’ and ‘BTW’ in the dialogue… really??Just not ready for publication.Plot – 3.5/5.0 (Good) – VERY MINOR SPOILERSOkay. Let’s be reasonable here… The premise of the story and the central plot; Very, very good.There was a lot to be said for the idea of the refugee fleet arriving in the middle of a conflict and the confusion it causes, but this doesn’t seem to be the entire focus of the plot and, as a result, the execution is very erratic.There is no given timeline for the start of the story. Martians are clearly an ‘alien’ race… or are they? The refugees are apparently the descendants of a colony… or are they? If they are, then why are they so different? Many hundreds of generations must have passed.The author freely admits that there are some things he knows were wrong, but that really doesn’t excuse the massive plot holes that are thrown into the read… and with the best will in the world, there has to be enough realism in sci-fi to give it grounding.This doesn’t seem to have any.General – 2.0/5.0 (Poor)Nice cover, good plot potential. Not at all executed well.Possibly the most memorable part of the story is Lexi’s constant efforts to get a sandwich and a coffee. Beyond this, the writing seems to be aimed at how this would look as a big movie scene.Unfortunately, that needs descriptive and a prose which does not continually throw meaningless terms out as if everyone understands them.The daft thing is, I didn’t hate this. I really wanted to like it and yes, there were brief flashes of a well-told story. Regrettably, they were too brief and too few.I really don’t think this is beyond salvation, but this author needs to embrace a more descriptive style and, at the very least, a proper writing structure and look at this work with fresh eyes.In its current incarnation, even as a free book and a very quick read… 2 Stars.
5 of 5 people found the following review helpful. seemed like it was missing a real resolution By J. Charpie Short story, seemed like it was missing a real resolution. I like the change in time references from standard minutes/hours, but beyond that - there was unnecessary foul language. Overall, I felt like I got 4/5 of an episode, that made me wishing there was more and made me wonder what the broader story was. Not a complete waste of time, but also not the best reading I've had lately.
2 of 2 people found the following review helpful. Three Stars By John J. Cotsonas Left a lot questions.
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